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In reply to the discussion: Glory and I [View all]

Waterguy

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3. true - like a letter meant for a true friend
Sun Sep 3, 2023, 12:59 AM
Sep 2023

everything, simplicity, spelling out honesty, trying to convey,
how you feel, distances both geographically, possibly more,
within any time and space,
And the unsaid universe comes rushing in unabashed.
The same old friend, with the same old shit -
but you know what, that's love.
Your peom illustrates,
Your intellect has surely survived, whilst,
your heart has surely decoded something more true -
deepfelt sorrow, friendship, love,
the animal expression defined as simply real.

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Glory and I [View all] barbtries Aug 2023 OP
You've PERFECTLY captured this special moment !!!!! Well done !!! Karadeniz Aug 2023 #1
thank you! barbtries Aug 2023 #2
true - like a letter meant for a true friend Waterguy Sep 2023 #3
Thank you Waterguy! barbtries Sep 2023 #4
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