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The Madcap

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Sun Dec 29, 2024, 02:24 PM Dec 29

Rose [View all]

A single rose
On a stem
On a bush
Near the fence

Full-flowered, alone
Scarlet on velvet
Petals spread wide
Absorbing the sunlight
On a breezeless day
Bright blue

Protected from harm by sharp thorns below
The rose stands in the midst
Of a sea of green leaves
With nearby buds awaiting their bloom

Deep in the center
A golden prize for the bees
Hovering nearby
Droplets of water
From the morning’s shower
Mirrors of light reflecting

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Then, a shake
The rose tilts to the side
Sheared from the bush
By a hand

A single stem taken
The rose at its end
Held gently and carried
In care

From the young man to his love
The rose is now given
A token of love young and new
Now not just a flower
But a sign of possibility
Between the young couple in bloom.

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Rose [View all] The Madcap Dec 29 OP
From the opening lines to the twist at the end . . . CaliforniaPeggy Dec 29 #1
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