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ddickey

(34 posts) Sat Jan 7, 2012, 12:29 AM Jan 2012

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Seeking comments and criticisms [View all]

Last edited Sat Jan 7, 2012, 01:34 AM - Edit history (1)

I'm not posting this simply to promote it; I am desperately craving some comments and criticisms to figure out what works or doesn't, what annoys people or doesn't, et cetera. I would appreciate any comments.

Here's a link (I'll warn you, some of the essays are long): http://nonobsense.blogspot.com/

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Seeking comments and criticisms [View all] ddickey Jan 2012 OP

Okay, you do need to make a major revision. HopeHoops Jan 2012 #1

Revised ddickey Jan 2012 #2

It is not reasonable to expect people to take things on faith, only to ask that they do. HopeHoops Jan 2012 #3

Okay, a few comments (in body of message) HopeHoops Jan 2012 #4

A quick response ddickey Jan 2012 #5

Feel free to harass and pick. And you're speaking to the MASTER of rambling! HopeHoops Jan 2012 #6

Taking you up on your offer ddickey Jan 2012 #8

Quite well done. Nice argument and cleanly presented. HopeHoops Jan 2012 #9

+1 dem644555il Mar 2012 #15

About your degrees ddickey Jan 2012 #11

Disagree strongly. Are you trying to write a term paper? If so, axe the profanity. McCamy Taylor Mar 2012 #12

Posted a new essay ddickey Jan 2012 #7

Essay about Afghanistan ddickey Jan 2012 #10

An interesting read... Fearless Mar 2012 #13

Thanks for the comments ddickey Mar 2012 #14

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