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Donkees

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5. I prefer ''B'' especially the upper right background and the golden reflections you've added

Reply to Rizen (Original post)

Mon Feb 3, 2025, 06:58 AM

Feb 3

to the character's face and body. I'm not fond of the snowflakes especially the perfectly centered one near the top. They remind me more of the 'snowflake projectors' used at christmas, than nuclear winter. Keep focusing on where you are leading the viewer's eye around the page, and where it stops. Keep refining.

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Book Cover Art v1.5 and 2 [View all] Rizen Feb 2 OP

The top one has a more sinister feel to it. SheltieLover Feb 2 #1

I like the first one better, I'm intrigued by what sort of place would have 'charged' rain like that.... Think. Again. Feb 2 #2

The first one is a much better design. Ocelot II Feb 2 #3

I prefer "A" LoisB Feb 2 #4

I prefer ''B'' especially the upper right background and the golden reflections you've added Donkees Feb 3 #5

Like A. Moody, and possibly Mysterious. electric_blue68 Feb 3 #6

How will your potential readers be seeing this cover? surrealAmerican Feb 3 #7

Thanks for all the replies. Rizen Feb 3 #8